Sunday, January 13, 2013

Paul Valéry on Stéphane Mallarmé / Valéry sobre Mallarmé

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Je me répresentais son expectative: l'âme, tendue en direction des harmoniques et concentré à percevoir l'événement d'un mot dans l'univers des mots, où elle se perd à appréhender l'ordre total des liaisons et des résonnances q'une pensée anxieuse de naître invoque...

Me imaginaba su expectativa: el alma extendida hacia los armónicos y concentrada en percibir el acontecimiento de una palabra en el universo de las palabras, donde se pierde aprehendiendo el orden total de conexiones y resonancias que un pensamiento ávido de nacer invoca...

I pictured his expectation: his soul, stretched toward the overtones and focused on perceiving the event of a word in the universe of words, where it loses itself grasping the entire order of connections and resonances invoked by a thought eager to be born...

Publicado originalmente como prefacio a una antología de poemas de Mallarmé, y luego en Varieté III. Pueden encontrar el ensayo en De Poe a Mallarmé. Ensayos de poética y estética, pero esta traducción es mía. Parece haber una versión algo diferente del ensayo en francés.

Published originally as a preface to a collection of Mallarmé's poetry, and later in Varieté III. You can find the passage in French in this essay by Fernando Gil in the journal Lampe-tempête. I haven't been able to find an English edition of the essay.

Thursday, January 10, 2013

Subject/Verb Agreement

In a previous post we talked about tricky cases of subject/verb agreement. Here are some more:

Singular pronouns require singular verbs, no matter what follows the pronoun

Another, anybody, anyone, anything, either, everyone, neither, no one, nobody, somebody, someone are all singular, and are hence  followed by a singular verb.

Each of the students has brought a morning snack.

Neither of the brothers is willing to make peace.

Theoretically, "none" must always be followed by a singular verb

Despite the movement of the plain, none of the passengers was frightened. 

Yet many grammarians believe that we should follow current usage. We can, therefore, use the plural in certain cases. According to Strunk and White, for instance, if "none" means "no one" or "not one" (not a single one), the verb is singular:
 

None of the children has played with the ball today. 

If the focus is on the group and "none" means "not any," then the verb is plural:

None of the students are carrying their backpacks today. 
Expressions introduced by "as well as," "including," "in addition to," "along with," and "together with" in compound subjects should be written between commas and do not determine the number of the verb. The latter must agree with the noun that is not part of the expression.

Lisa, along with her mother and sisters, goes shopping every Saturday.

And the last one for today: Nouns that are plural in form but singular in meaning require singular verbs. Some examples are mathematics, demographics, and dynamics.

The dynamics of their relationship changes constantly.

Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Two poems by Antonio Cisneros, my translation / Dos poemas de Antonio Cisneros


Berlin Nocturne

The pollen of the young larches sails amid the red-brick-colored night
(the pollen of hay fever).
Like snow it travels in whirlwinds but has plumages and gets
entangled in the steeped corollas of the female larches and grazes at whim.
They are the so-called ways of life and (with scant excitement) of love;
delight of laziness in summer (Parma ham I remember you).
I put out  my cigarette, clear my throat and open the window / packed with red air and fresh pollen.
Warm and tame the breeze, oil lamp lit, the sheet rumpled.
A fly larger than a pigeon rests on my shoulder.


Requiem (2)

 Hans Stephan, in memoriam

Not the side wall or the white sky,
the grubs in the back
and the rue, so dense. No to the
end of all visions.
Not the slice of lemon in the swamps
or the stink of carbide.
Not the flabby wobble of mosquitoes
where the jungle starts,
and the great confusion.
Rather the beloved face,
those small pores, beach skin
and the sparkling of brine in the west.
A very light air - no fry food -
the bed well made,
the knees roomy,
the blanket slight and cool.
The short nails of the beloved hand
on the terrified back of the flocks.
Kyrie eleison
Christie eleison
Kyrie eleison.
A deer, blue and calm like ice,
be the certainty of resurrection.


From Propios como ajenos. Una antología personal Lima: Editorial Inca.
Some of his poetry has been published in English: Spider Hangs too Far from the Ground and At Night the Cats



Nocturno de Berlín

El polen de los jóvenes alerces navega entre la noche color rojo-ladrillo / (el mismo polen de la fiebre del heno) / Como la nieve viaja en remolinos pero tiene plumajes y se enreda / en las corolas remojadas de los alerces-hembra y pasta a su placer. / Son los llamados modos de la vida y (con poco entusiasmo) del amor. / Delicias de perezas en verano (jamoncito de Parma te recuerdo). / Apago el cigarrillo, carraspeo y abro la ventana/repleta de aire rojo y polen fresco. / Tibia y mansa la brisa, encendido el candil, la sábana revuelta. / Una mosca mayor que una paloma se posa en mi hombro.


Requiem (2)  In memoriam Hans Stephan

No el muro lateral ni el cielo blanco, / los gorgojos al fondo, / y la ruda tan densa. No al final / de todas las visiones. / No el gajo de limón en los pantanos / ni el tufo de carburo. / No el fofo bamboleo del mosquito / donde empieza la selva / y la gran confusión. / Más bien el rostro amado, / esos poros pequeños, piel de playa / y brillos de salmuera en el poniente. / Un aire muy ligero, sin frituras / la cama bien tendida, / las rodillas holgadas, / la manta leve y fresca. / Las uñas cortas de la mano amada / sobre el lomo de pavor de los rebaños. / Kyrie eleison / Christie eleison / Kyrie eleison. / Un ciervo azul y calmo como el hielo / sea certeza de la resurección.

Aquí pueden encontrar el prólogo del autor a Propios como ajenos.

Monday, January 7, 2013

Salman Rushdie on translation / SR, sobre la traducción


The word 'translation' comes, etymologically, from the Latin for 'bearing across'. Having been borne across the world, we are translated men. It is normally supposed that something always gets lost in translation; I cling, obstinately, to the notion that something can also be gained.

From Imaginary Homelands. London: Granta Books. You can read more about the book here.

La palabra "traducción" deriva etimológicamente del latín: "llevar de un lugar al otro". En tanto fuimos llevados de un lugar al otro del mundo, somos seres traducidos. Se supone habitualmente que algo siempre se pierde en la traducción. Yo me aferro obstinadamente a la idea de que algo también se puede ganar.

No encontré edición en español, solo en portugués. Si les interesa, les paso el dato.

Thursday, January 3, 2013

Subject/Verb Agreement

 

The general rule for subject-verb agreement is that in any sentence, the verb or the auxiliary must agree with the subject in person and number. Yet before making decisions about person and number, we must make sure that we have the right subject. This may be difficult when subject and verb are separated by prepositional phrases (phrases introduced by prepositions), direct objects, or dependent clauses (clauses that cannot stand by themselves as sentences and are introduced by pronouns, adverbs, etc.).

A prepositional phrase following the subject does not determine the number of the verb

One of the boys is wearing a red shirt.

We must be careful not to confuse a direct object with the subject of the sentence. 

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Nouns that are part of a dependent clause cannot be the subject of the sentence.

The artist who paints street musicians, vendors, and beggars captures the real vibe of a city.  

Monday, December 31, 2012

The Year by Ella Wheeler WIlcox


What can be said in New Year rhymes,
That's not been said a thousand times?

The new years come, the old years go,
We know we dream, we dream we know.

We rise up laughing with the light,
We lie down weeping with the night.

We hug the world until it stings,
We curse it then and sigh for wings.

We live, we love, we woo, we wed,
We wreathe our brides, we sheet our dead.

We laugh, we weep, we hope, we fear,
And that's the burden of the year.


WISHING EVERYONE THE BEST FOR THE NEW YEAR / LO MEJOR PARA TODOS EN EL NUEVO AÑO

Tuesday, December 25, 2012

Two poems by Idea Vilariño (translated by Judith Filc) / Dos poemas de IV (Uruguay, 1920-2009)

 

Midday

Transparent the airs, transparent the
sickle of morning,
the white warm peaks, the gestures of the waves,
all that sea, all that sea performing its
deep task,
the engrossed sea,
the sea, at that hour of honey when instinct
buzzes like a drowsy bee...
Sun, love, expanded white lilies of the sea,
blond limbs sensitive and tender as bodies,
vast, pale sands.

Transparent the air, transparent
the voices, the silence.
On the shores of love, of sea, of morning,
on the hot sand trembling with whiteness,
each one a fruit hatching its death.


Comparison

Just as in the virgin
beach the wind bends
the slight, green reed
drawing a
delicate circle on the sand
thus 
in me
your memory.


Mediodía

Transparentes los aires, transparentes / la hoz de la mañana, / los blancos montes tibios, los gestos de las olas, / todo ese mar, todo ese mar que cumple / su profunda tarea, / el mar ensimismado, / el mar, a esa hora de miel en que el instinto / zumba como una abeja somnolienta... / Sol, amor, azucenas dilatadas, marinas, / Ramas rubias sensibles y tiernas como cuerpos, / vastas arenas pálidas. // Transparentes los aires, transparentes / las voces, el silencio. / A orillas del amor, del mar, de la mañana, / en la arena caliente, temblante de blancura, / cada uno es un fruto madurando su muerte.

Comparación

Como en la playa virgen / dobla el viento / el leve junco verde / que dibuja / un delicado círculo en la arena / así en mí / tu recuerdo.